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Big admirer of JRR Tolkien and all his works. Writing is my greatest passion - music and science tied second place; always seeking to hone my writing skills. Horribly shy and timid when meeting new people in real life or online.



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Title: Feather and Fetch by Eidolon, Kenaz
Rated: Teen [ - ]
Summary: Haldir must look to his past to see his future.
Category: Fiction
Characters: Beleg, Haldir
Content: Drabble
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 6664 | Read count: 1344

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Published: August 07, 2012 | Updated: August 07, 2012


Reviewer: Iavalir Signed
Date: August 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Feather and Fetch

(copy and pasting this from the Slashy Santa website, in case I lose this review too!)

I've read this a couple of times already, and I wanted to tell you how very much I enjoyed this! I was surprised anyone took up this pairing, since Haldir/Beleg is a rather peculiar one (as many of my ships are, which you've seen when you got your assignment!), but you've created a very beautiful scenario using the characters. I would never have thought of Haldir being an elf of Doriath, and I appreciated such an original view on one of my favorite elves. :) Beleg also I enjoyed with all my heart.

Lyrical is definitely what I would call your writing style! Very elven, and slight melancholic? Or perhaps that was Haldir's heart breathing through. I like that things weren't tied together at the end, leaving the reader to wonder what happens next. You've given us poignant snapshots of what is a long and winding road, and I am pleased I got to glimpse into part of the road of their story.

Thank you for writing this lovely tale for me! :)