If you have time and desire to find the Anya/twins story, I would definitely be interested. I look forward to more stories in this verse, I realized I was reaching the end...
Author's Response: I have just zapped the link to you. You've got a little way to go to reach the end of the ones of mine that are here. And I will upload a couple more of the short ones soon, as we have reached them in the time-line of stories here, now. I promise to keep you going for a little while yet...
I don't know. Dawn was incredibly strong, even though she might only be a bemused teenager. I do think it would be a very interesting spin, and, I think, quite different. (I am not one to shy away from angst stories if they are well done... *smirk*) You going to give it a try? ;)
Author's Response: **You going to give it a try? ;)** Hmm - well there are about 6 or 7 more stories already written in this 'verse that are not here, yet. But there are three more awaiting writing after the one I am currently finishing (one of which is likely to be as long as Brotherhood), and then there is the story where Glorfindel/Legolas pregnancy would be possible and actually believable without any magic to be written, and then.... well, you never know! Someone has written Anya/The Twins. I could probably find it for you if you were interested!
Wow, this was definitely hot. I love how Tindome is so curious, wants to know the Noldor word for Vie, and which twin is which. They are such gentle lovers, but masters at it. I loved reading this, is was just delightful! I wonder if Elladan would indeed notice a change after this, whether he would no longer feel like she prefers Elrohir. Of course, being comforted at Fangorn, and then again after the abduction in Minas Tirith, is would be rather natural that she would at least temporarily feel more comfortable with Elrohir. It figures that should would be able to tell them apart by taste, and I would guess not many others could. I really think they are almost sorry that her fea sang to Rumil, and not them... Thanks for a delightful afternoon!
Author's Response: **I loved reading this, is was just delightful!** Thank you! **They are such gentle lovers, but masters at it.** I think they were definitely careful to remember her, still limited, experience! I think the sense of balance in the relationship will feel restored to all of them. But as for the fëar of these three 'singing together' - can you imagine throwing that bemused teenager who still had problems with who she is and what she is into the confused and highly emotionally stressed household of the family of Elrond at that time? Hmm... it would have been an interesting story, but there would be a lot more angst! The Valar might have thought that would be a bit much for their Key. But it would have been a fascinating story, now that you mention it!
LOVE this! Needed more then a fan or two though... :D I loved he she totally didn't realize until the next morning that Elladan would have been a possibly unwilling semi participant to this! Of course that would not be something that she would consider given the circumstances. I had been wondering whether she would get.... antsy away from Rumil for so long a time. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. I don't suppose Elladan minded all that much... :)
Heehee :) That is certainly a wonderful way to help you get to sleep!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! And yes - I reckon it certainly beats counting sheep...
*fans self* Lucky her! I am wondering if your view of the twins being one fea in two bodies is canon or a conclusion you came to? I don't know that I've seen it stated that way before and it's intriguing. It definitely changes the way I view them. I love how she wants to much keep which is which straight and how that means much to them. Threesomes can be so confusing but you avoided that nicely. Very hot and nicely done!
Author's Response: I am pretty sure that Tolkien says (in Law And Customs?) that the fea comes before the hroar - and so the single fertilised egg cell that is required for identical twins would have already contained one fea. When the first split is total so becoming two embryos, rather than just doubling the cells of a single embryo, it seemed logical to me that the fea would have to do the same thing. I don't think it makes them less than a whole person each - but that their two fea are still very closely linked. Isabeau of Greenlea, in her Unabeau 'verse stories, comes from a similar base, I think, as she regards them as soul-bound to the same extent as a married couple - but not so as to exclude them also forming such a bond with an individual partner each if they want to. As for the threesome working and being hot - thank you!
OK- read it again. I love the relationship between the Els and Tindome. in particular the bet they make with each other and the teasing. Such a great idea.
And I like the way you have teased out the relationship between the three of them and how it has changed and changed again. Thnak you for a very nice New Year!!! :)
And CONGRATUALTIONS ON YOUR AMAZING SUCCESS AT MEFA!!!!!!!!!!!!! YYeee- ha!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, and thank you! Like you, I tend to use the sexual encounters to help illustrate/define relationships, and changes in them - apart from the sheer fun of things - and so I really do appreciate that you like the way their relationships are not static. As for the MEFAs - I am all a-squee!! I will post A Powerful Absence here in the not too distant future, as I have my serious winner from last year (Pure Morning) - but not for a while as it is not 'the same version' of the twins - it doesn't happen in this 'verse and is, as you know, very different.
I read this last night far too late and had to re-read it, just for the literary merit of course. Such lovely prose, such precise use of language....such....gorgeous and lovely hot elves!!!! ho hum. I'm just ogin to read it again.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you appreciated the literary merit... :P
Lol! Like, totally lucky her, eh? You write a wonderful Elrohir and hot? Oh yes, definitely! Lots of great little details, and steamy without being over the top. Looking forward to seeing the next part. :)
Author's Response: **You write a wonderful Elrohir and hot? Oh yes, definitely! ** Thank you! I'm posting part two tomorrow - it is called 'And Then There Were Three...' This might give you a clue as to whether she backed out or not!
Right! Got it- you are a terrible tease!! Love you forever XX
Oooooooohhhhh. Aahhh. Um. Smacks lips. How good was that!
Voirrey- I like'totally' enjoyed reading that. Lucky Tindome! Love the tenderness as well as the eroticism. Elrohir, well, I was very much enjoying imagining him - looking eye to eye, eye to ...er...vië. I like the 'heart-hammer' translation very much.
When I have recovered, I wil r eview more intelligently... perhaps, but I suspect reading it again will produce the same reaction!
Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Having read the first half you will understand why the second half - which I'll post in a day or two, is called 'And then there were three...'