I'm glad to see this put back online. I noted you took it down and worried if my review had been discouraging, which was definitely not the intention. Now I see you've been working on it. You've improved it so much! It's a lot easier to read now. Corssovers are always difficult I think, meaning they tend to have a smaller audience, because you need people who are fan of both worlds. However, I happen to really like Star Wars so I am now wondering where this story is going. Keep up the good work!

p.s. Did you change your pen name or am I just really confused?

Author's Response: I guess I should have put a note up. Major rewrite in progress, your feedback was EXACTLY what I needed. Plus Spiced Wine and Pink Siamese go hold of me and helped a lot as well. I know I have a relatively small market for this story and really glad to know you like it. Yes I changed my pen name. Life is a journey and we are all pilgrims traveling its various paths.